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Old: Circus Page 1 by okchickadee Old: Circus Page 1 by okchickadee
This is also two years old. I never got past the first page, I just totally overworked the whole thing. So I'm redoing this whole story eventually--I think my visual storytelling was terrible and confusing back then, and there are multitudes of little problems all over the panels. I think I've smoothed some of them out by now, and now that I've proved to myself that I'm actually capable of finishing a comic, maybe I'll manage to finish this one. :/
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EeNii Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Filmographer
Feature: [link] c:
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donya-kills-fishies Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
This is super! x
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Liche1004 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009
Oh my god..... every single art works make me pause and stare at them with wordless
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bluealaris Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow, holy shit. Your work is inspiring me as I type. I love your line work and I loudly worship you! I can't wait to see more. *runs off to the main gallery*
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rilii Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2008
the facial expressions on the audience members are awesome c: this picture is amazing for how old you say it is (if i looked back two years, i'd see something worse than my already lame 1 deviation). you're really talented c: :heart:
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whillikers Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2008
intense.
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bellechevalier Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2007
Hm. Now, this piece does have flow, but it's kind of chaotic. I guess it might be a bit difficult to strike a balance between your lovely, surreal style and coherency? This certainly isn't, well, *linear* (not that storytelling *has* to be, but clarity's even more of a challenge when it isn't).

Then again, it's hard to tell where you were going with it, with just one page.
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mrdynamite Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Student General Artist
your inks are fantastic TEACH ME
what pens are you using?
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okchickadee Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Aw, thank you! The Staedtler Mars Graphic 3000 Duo is my pen of choice--it's a brush pen marker that's really durable and flexible and doesn't go blunt like Tombows do. The problem is that they're hard to get ahold of individually, so I've also heard the Faber-Castell Pitt recommended, as well as the Pentel Brush Pen. The latter is great, has a sort of dry brush effect.
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yristan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007  Hobbyist
making something visually coherent has always been a big problem for me too, but your inks are pretty much epic. plus the slightly jumpy continuity of the panels gives the whole thing a dreamlike atmosphere.

so. yeah, i still like it a lot. <3
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tigrillonc Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
your work deserves a lot more credit... it's amazing
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inechi Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
i think this is a very good work artistically, but yes i agree with you as a comic it fails, it's confusing because it has so many details in little space, and the motion jumps from one thing to another, making the viewer get lost. but im sureyou can manage to find a middlepoint between too many details and total simpleness and do something great.
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